Title: When Autumn Falls

Author: misfits

Genre: Romance, Melodrama

Reviewer: shhmquiet

Title (5/5)
I really like the title. It really retains in the mind and it’s very original. I tried searching it on AFF and your story is the only one with that kind of title. It really fits the feel of the story, melancholic and romantic, and I really like how it has a different meaning to it rather than just the literal meaning to the title. It’s really well done. Good job!

Appearance (10/10)
I really like the movie poster-like appearance of the poster. The theme of the story is shown properly and it’s really pleasing to the eye. The soft colors give off the light and melancholic vibe of the story and it also complements the bright red background. By the way, I like your bright red autumn leaves background. The foreword that you have is really neat and pleasing to see. I like how you used different fonts and photos in the foreword. The chapters are also neat and easy to read. Awesomesauce!

Description/Foreword (8/10)
Let’s start with the description. The descriptions is good. Uh, yeah. It’s just good. I do feel like it’s telling too much of the story. I can already guess what’s happening and what’s going to happen. Maybe you could make it shorter to make people more curious about it. It really needs more oomph!

For the foreword, I really think it’s neat and beautiful. I also think that the text bit in the foreword would be better as the description since it gives a better glimpse of the story without giving anything away. It had that little something that would make any reader curious and it is beautifully written. I love how you simply used edited photos instead of a full-blown character chart with the personalities and bio.

Characters (12/15)
Okay, I really think I’m weird and I focus too much on the side characters, but I really wanted to see a bit more from Chaerin. I wanted to get a grasp of who she really is and have her own style in the dialogue. These things would show how tight of their relationship is. I always just read how Gaeul wants to be just like Chaerin who is all girly and an ace in dating, but I don’t read much from her. There isn’t as much interaction as I wanted. This might sound off and you might say that she’s just a