Story: Love/Hate Relationship (One shot collection)

Author: Loveyoona4ever1998

Genre:

Reviewer: SoaringCliche

1. Title: [3/5 pts.] 
>Love/Hate, I have NO comment on title as it’s a chapter title so I guess it’s acceptable. For me as a reader it made feel a bit intrigued and curious as to how it would relate to your plot…and that usually doesn’t happen to me, so great job for that!
 

2. Poster/Graphics/Background: [4/5 pts.]
I love it, it’s simple yet it’s there, it exists. Other than that no comment…though it dos give off a bit of an angst feel…a feel that I usually dislike. 
 

3. Foreword/Description: [6/10 pts.]
I went to the beginning of your story to well, the foreword (duh) and I liked it but I think you should a bit more of it. Maybe you should add a sentence or two about each one-shot…or a sentence or two from the story- kind of like a sneak peek. Other than that it’s fine. 
 

4. Plot: [24/30 pts]
Though it’s a bit of a cliché plot (I even write cliché stories) the plot kept my attention from the start