Story: Birth of Mangwondong Family

Author: SooJunior

Genre: Romance, Drama

Reviewer: bibim-bap

Title: [3/5 pts.] 
The title is okay. It’s definitely an unique title but there is a type it should be “Birth of “the” Mangwondong Family”, you need to add in the “the” to make it grammatically correct. Other then the grammar issue your title is fine but maybe as you continue the story you’ll think of a different name. Just keep that in mind okay? 
 

Poster/Graphics/Background: [3/5 pts.]
I’m glad you had a poster because stories with a poster have more of an appeal then stories that don’t have posters and yours was a good poster. It had all the members from both A Pink and Infinite and some quotes which told us, the readers what your story would be like.
 

Foreword/Description: [5/10 pts.]
Your description was a little short and since I feel like your story is going to go on for a while I think you should add in a few more lines to give the readers a better idea of your story but if you plan on ending your story in less than three more chapters then your fine. What bothered me though was how you put in the punctuation your story. After you wrote the last word to the sentence you would space after the word then type in the punctuation. Like this . It should be like this. 
 

Plot: [20/30 pts] 
Two groups (or people) sharing a dorm together. For me personally it tells me that your story was going to be a bit cliché to be honest when I go through the featured stories page, this kind of plot is usually the kind that gets featured, so it’s fine I guess. I actually