Story: Do You Love Your Neighbors

Author: deibaby03

Genre: Happy, Comedy, Cute

Reviewer: bibim-bap

Title [4/5]:

I just automatically fell in love with your title! It fit the story so well and it was something you would find for a cute, happy love story. It totally got me into your story. (Just don’t forget the question mark) 

Appearance [10/10]:

The overall appearance was fine with me. Though, the poster didn’t really match the background. They were both bright and happy, but it didn’t seem to fit together. 

Description [9/10]:

The description wasn’t too bad. It didn’t really make me click the next button. Try adding something that literally make readers want more of your story. Just telling us that a girl fell in love with her neighbor won’t exactly get attention. Like try showing little bits of the conflict of the story in there as well.

Characters [12/15]:

The image that Hyeri portrayed was well-written. The only thing is how the other boys of Teen Top are. Their personalities weren’t that different as what they would be in real life, or how you would put it in the charac