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Story: Catching Cars
Author: trixyBee
Genre: Supernatural
Reviewer: baekyeols
Story Title {5/5}:
Definitely eye-catching and made me curious about the story. Did not give anything away, full points.
Appearance {6/10}:
Poster and background are both present, but the color was too bright. The background color hurts my eyes and it made it hard to read. The poster/picture was fine, but you might want to change the background.
Description/Foreword {8/10}:
The description was kind of short, although it might make the reader curious, it may not be enough to make them click the next button. Maybe you can add a short excerpt from the story to spark their interest more. The foreword basically explain the genre and why you wrote the story. It’s neat and easy to follow.
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