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Story: Catching Cars

Author: trixyBee

Genre: Supernatural

Reviewer: baekyeols

 

 

 

Story Title {5/5}:

Definitely eye-catching and made me curious about the story. Did not give anything away, full points.

 

Appearance {6/10}:

Poster and background are both present, but the color was too bright. The background color hurts my eyes and it made it hard to read. The poster/picture was fine, but you might want to change the background.

 

Description/Foreword {8/10}:

The description was kind of short, although it might make the reader curious, it may not be enough to make them click the next button. Maybe you can add a short excerpt from the story to spark their interest more. The foreword basically explain the genre and why you wrote the story. It’s neat and easy to follow.

 

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0verlord_Nim
#2
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flamzfox
#3
Can we be affiliates (we're an review shop)?

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LadyofReincarnation
#4
Hello ^__^ Thank you very much for the graphic review!~
It was short yet simple and I loved the sincerity from the words. I had intended for Sulli to touch Luhan's face as if she was trying to annoy him (he looks quite annoyed in the picture too XD), and yeah :D
But other than that I had fun reading my review :)
Should I post the credit in a blog post, since I don't have an actual story for the graphic?
kaiura
#5
Chapter 57: Sorry I'm late picking my review up! I will credit the review shop within the next hour. I really appreciated the suggestions :)
Roochi
#6
Chapter 58: Thank you for the review! It was helpful.
I'll make sure to credit as soon as i get to use the pc :)
xiu_pao #7
Hello, may we be affiliated? ;u; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390445
CupieCakesx3
#8
Chapter 56: Thanks for the review ^^
king-gyu #9
Chapter 55: Thank you for the review :)
imaloveofnuest
#10
Chapter 53: Thank you for reviewing 'A Royal Fantasy' , i will heed on your advice !! <3