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Story: Hey Ugly, I Love You!

Author: Jichu--

Genre: Romance, Comedy

Reviewer: bibim-bap

 

Title: [5/5]

Your title is great (and catchy too)! Your punctuation was all good so perfect score to you!


Appearance: [10/10]

Okay, let me just say, I love your layout! It’s so cute and colorful! Though, it’s kind of small but that’s always something the zoom-in can solve. The neatness in your writing was good too!


Description/Foreword: [7/10]

The content in the description was okay. I really liked the little information section (I seriously love those). Oh, and I totally love the trailer! The plot was kind of confusing though – especially the part about the part about Chanyeol. I had to read it a few times to understand it better.


Characterization: [13/15]

Characterization was okay, more or less. Ji-Hye’s character was well-written but Chanyeol and Kris were okay. I don’t know if you meant for it, but Chanyeol and

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0verlord_Nim
#2
Would you like to be Affiliates?
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flamzfox
#3
Can we be affiliates (we're an review shop)?

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LadyofReincarnation
#4
Hello ^__^ Thank you very much for the graphic review!~
It was short yet simple and I loved the sincerity from the words. I had intended for Sulli to touch Luhan's face as if she was trying to annoy him (he looks quite annoyed in the picture too XD), and yeah :D
But other than that I had fun reading my review :)
Should I post the credit in a blog post, since I don't have an actual story for the graphic?
kaiura
#5
Chapter 57: Sorry I'm late picking my review up! I will credit the review shop within the next hour. I really appreciated the suggestions :)
Roochi
#6
Chapter 58: Thank you for the review! It was helpful.
I'll make sure to credit as soon as i get to use the pc :)
xiu_pao #7
Hello, may we be affiliated? ;u; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390445
CupieCakesx3
#8
Chapter 56: Thanks for the review ^^
king-gyu #9
Chapter 55: Thank you for the review :)
imaloveofnuest
#10
Chapter 53: Thank you for reviewing 'A Royal Fantasy' , i will heed on your advice !! <3