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Title: Somehow possible
Author: blacksmile
Genre: , angst,
Reviewer: bibim-bap
Title: [4/5] You’re title is eye-grabbing and interesting (it made me read it, hur hur hur). Though, I wasn’t exactly sure how it applied to the story. Also, don’t forget to capitalize the ‘p’ in ‘Somehow Possible’!
Appearance: [9/10] Your poster and background suited the theme really well and your content was organized. Though, there was one thing that irked be a little. Everytime you emphasized a word, you would italicize and bold it. If you really want to emphasize a word, I think italicizing it is all it needs.
Description/Foreword: [10/10] I am just – in love with your description. It was so deep and descriptive – it made me want to read the story more! It displayed the sadness and the love he had for him. It was intriguing and surely an eye-catcher to me.
Your foreword was also very interesting. I seriously love the little things authors add with the information about the story (like the title and characters and stuff like that). It was great!
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