calling blacksmile

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Title: Somehow possible

Author: blacksmile

Genre: , angst,

Reviewer: bibim-bap

 

 

Title: [4/5] You’re title is eye-grabbing and interesting (it made me read it, hur hur hur). Though, I wasn’t exactly sure how it applied to the story. Also, don’t forget to capitalize the ‘p’ in ‘Somehow Possible’!


Appearance: [9/10] Your poster and background suited the theme really well and your content was organized. Though, there was one thing that irked be a little. Everytime you emphasized a word, you would italicize and bold it. If you really want to emphasize a word, I think italicizing it is all it needs. 


Description/Foreword: [10/10] I am just – in love with your description. It was so deep and descriptive – it made me want to read the story more! It displayed the sadness and the love he had for him. It was intriguing and surely an eye-catcher to me.
Your foreword was also very interesting. I seriously love the little things authors add with the information about the story (like the title and characters and stuff like that). It was great!


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0verlord_Nim
#2
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flamzfox
#3
Can we be affiliates (we're an review shop)?

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LadyofReincarnation
#4
Hello ^__^ Thank you very much for the graphic review!~
It was short yet simple and I loved the sincerity from the words. I had intended for Sulli to touch Luhan's face as if she was trying to annoy him (he looks quite annoyed in the picture too XD), and yeah :D
But other than that I had fun reading my review :)
Should I post the credit in a blog post, since I don't have an actual story for the graphic?
kaiura
#5
Chapter 57: Sorry I'm late picking my review up! I will credit the review shop within the next hour. I really appreciated the suggestions :)
Roochi
#6
Chapter 58: Thank you for the review! It was helpful.
I'll make sure to credit as soon as i get to use the pc :)
xiu_pao #7
Hello, may we be affiliated? ;u; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390445
CupieCakesx3
#8
Chapter 56: Thanks for the review ^^
king-gyu #9
Chapter 55: Thank you for the review :)
imaloveofnuest
#10
Chapter 53: Thank you for reviewing 'A Royal Fantasy' , i will heed on your advice !! <3