Title: The Musical Man

Author: shizunebachi

Genre: Angst

Reviewer: cherrylisa

Story title (4/5):

The title is great; in fact it greatly contributes to the story itself. It links itself to the story perfectly. Even though it could be changed into a better one, this title slides it off. A very eye-catching one and definitely perked my interest.

Appearance (8.5/10): 

I’ll just judge it by presentation.
The presentation is nice and very fit. The font and size are easy to read. You did a great job in describing simple things. Your writing style is very descriptive, even though there are some parts that seem to be cliché…it didn’t bother me at all. Just took out some points because you lacked the justification of the description of Hongki’s and Jonghun’s background. You didn’t point it out well on the plot and you could have mentioned it by the end or in the beginning or so. But other than that, it’s great. 

For the poster, you could have one for it attracts the readers. The readers need to know how well it is off even just by looking at the poster and by the way, the background is nice :)

 

Description (9/10):

The description is simple and short. A very alluring one. It quickly lures in readers and questions what it is and so. It didn’t give out the whole plot but instead perks up more of the reader’s interest and curiousness.
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