Title: Destiny ?

Author: kiki420

Genre: Happy

Reviewer: cherrylisa

Story title (3/5): I couldn’t say whether the title has connection with the story at all or its connection would appear later. I found some hints, but very weak in the reader’s eyes. The title isn’t eye-catching nor spot-on but I could say it had my interest on it. Regarding about your title, it’s really not necessary to have two question marks nor to have a question mark at the end of the title. It’s a bit bother, and the title could have been much better, seeing that the title is often used and that I haven’t seen its contribution yet to the story.

Appearance (8/10): The genres are spread out perfectly throughout the story and I have no problem with that. The poster looks nice and all, showing off more like a character chart due to the names. Blending and rightful colours are to be observed because it’s not highly maintained in the current poster, but that’s okay, though. The story is neat, no unnecessary placing of things in the story and so. Your writing style is simple; balancing the dialogue and narration, quite neat but could have been neater.

Description (7/10): The description is okay. It didn’t tell out the whole plot at all, instead it made me (the readers) wonder what’s the catch and all. Though I find it not alluring, nor does it intrigue me, the description could have been better than the present.

Characters (13/15): The characters are okay. You’ve developed them throughout the story very well, playing their roles and showin