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Story: How Passion Brought Us Together
Author: SimplyCuddly
Genre: Comedy, Romance
Reviewer: baekyeols
Story Title {3/5}:
Personally the title doesn't attract me to read the story.
It gives away the storyline a bit and doesn't make me wonder what the story is about.
Appearance {10/10}:
The layout of the story is very neat and clean. Poster and background are both present
The current graphics of the story matches the story very well and stars make me feel really
comfortable while I’m reading.
Description/Foreword {6/10}:
The description practically gave away the whole storyline. It’s a basic outline,
but the reader will know what will happen. I suggest taken out some parts so
the readers become curious and maybe throw in some excerpts from the first
few chapters. For me, I tend to want to read stories if there is a good description and
small glimpse of the fanfic.
Characters {13/15}:
I liked the characters and their personalities. I know that Hyejung is a tomboy
but you sometimes stress on that too much.
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