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Story: Out of this World - An EXO One Shot Collection

Author: k-rst-n

Genre: Fluff, romance

Reviewer: baekyeols

 


 

 

Story Title {4/5}:

It is straightforward and fits the story well. But ‘Out of this World,’ is too overused. There isn't much connection from the one shots to the title. The t in this should be captitalized. The title chapters for each one shot matches well though.

 

Appearance {8/10}:

Both the background and poster are present. The color gave off a nice feeling but the main poster’s font looks kind of off.

 

Description/Foreword {6/10}:

Your description was rather short, and it lacked a bit of things. Just by looking at the title, we already know this is going to be a one shot collection of EXO. I think the first line is unnecessary, but keep the second line that says “The boys believe thei

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0verlord_Nim
#2
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Can we be affiliates (we're an review shop)?

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LadyofReincarnation
#4
Hello ^__^ Thank you very much for the graphic review!~
It was short yet simple and I loved the sincerity from the words. I had intended for Sulli to touch Luhan's face as if she was trying to annoy him (he looks quite annoyed in the picture too XD), and yeah :D
But other than that I had fun reading my review :)
Should I post the credit in a blog post, since I don't have an actual story for the graphic?
kaiura
#5
Chapter 57: Sorry I'm late picking my review up! I will credit the review shop within the next hour. I really appreciated the suggestions :)
Roochi
#6
Chapter 58: Thank you for the review! It was helpful.
I'll make sure to credit as soon as i get to use the pc :)
xiu_pao #7
Hello, may we be affiliated? ;u; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390445
CupieCakesx3
#8
Chapter 56: Thanks for the review ^^
king-gyu #9
Chapter 55: Thank you for the review :)
imaloveofnuest
#10
Chapter 53: Thank you for reviewing 'A Royal Fantasy' , i will heed on your advice !! <3