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Story: Bus Stop
Author: SummersDay
Genre: Romance/ Inspirational
Reviewer: baekyeols
Story Title {5/5}:
Your title was plain,there are quite a few stories with the title ‘Bus Stop.’ But after reading the story, I think it’s a perfect title. I can't think of any other title that matches the one shot.
Appearance {9/10}:
It’s simple, and fits the mood well. The background could be plainer though, just so it matches the poster.
Description/Foreword {7/10}:
Since all you gave was a quote, I’m not sure if it’s enough to get people to actually read the story. Maybe you would want to include parts of the story, or important snippets of it. Here is an example:
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