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Story: Bus Stop

Author: SummersDay

Genre: Romance/ Inspirational 

Reviewer: baekyeols

 

 

 

 

 

 

Story Title {5/5}:

Your title was plain,there are quite a few stories with the title ‘Bus Stop.’ But after reading the story, I think it’s a perfect title. I can't think of any other title that matches the one shot.

 

 

Appearance {9/10}:

It’s simple, and fits the mood well. The background could be plainer though, just so it matches the poster.

 

Description/Foreword {7/10}:

Since all you gave was a quote, I’m not sure if it’s enough to get people to actually read the story. Maybe you would want to include parts of the story, or important snippets of it. Here is an example:

 

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0verlord_Nim
#2
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flamzfox
#3
Can we be affiliates (we're an review shop)?

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LadyofReincarnation
#4
Hello ^__^ Thank you very much for the graphic review!~
It was short yet simple and I loved the sincerity from the words. I had intended for Sulli to touch Luhan's face as if she was trying to annoy him (he looks quite annoyed in the picture too XD), and yeah :D
But other than that I had fun reading my review :)
Should I post the credit in a blog post, since I don't have an actual story for the graphic?
kaiura
#5
Chapter 57: Sorry I'm late picking my review up! I will credit the review shop within the next hour. I really appreciated the suggestions :)
Roochi
#6
Chapter 58: Thank you for the review! It was helpful.
I'll make sure to credit as soon as i get to use the pc :)
xiu_pao #7
Hello, may we be affiliated? ;u; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390445
CupieCakesx3
#8
Chapter 56: Thanks for the review ^^
king-gyu #9
Chapter 55: Thank you for the review :)
imaloveofnuest
#10
Chapter 53: Thank you for reviewing 'A Royal Fantasy' , i will heed on your advice !! <3