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Story: Our Crazy Life and Work

Author:  Kpopxoxo

Genre: Comedy

Reviewer: bibim-bap (KindergardenGirl)

 

 

Title: 3/5

At first, it doesn’t sound like something interesting. Try to put more effort to make readers actually click your story and read it. 


Appearance: 10/10

The poster and the background was fine with me. (I found the background very cute ^^)


Description/Foreword: 6/10

I think that you should describe more in your description. The plot sounded cliché and could’ve used more descriptive writing. So what if two girls are working for a Korean entertainment company? It sounds all too common and predictable
 

Characters: 8/15

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0verlord_Nim
#2
Would you like to be Affiliates?
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flamzfox
#3
Can we be affiliates (we're an review shop)?

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LadyofReincarnation
#4
Hello ^__^ Thank you very much for the graphic review!~
It was short yet simple and I loved the sincerity from the words. I had intended for Sulli to touch Luhan's face as if she was trying to annoy him (he looks quite annoyed in the picture too XD), and yeah :D
But other than that I had fun reading my review :)
Should I post the credit in a blog post, since I don't have an actual story for the graphic?
kaiura
#5
Chapter 57: Sorry I'm late picking my review up! I will credit the review shop within the next hour. I really appreciated the suggestions :)
Roochi
#6
Chapter 58: Thank you for the review! It was helpful.
I'll make sure to credit as soon as i get to use the pc :)
xiu_pao #7
Hello, may we be affiliated? ;u; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390445
CupieCakesx3
#8
Chapter 56: Thanks for the review ^^
king-gyu #9
Chapter 55: Thank you for the review :)
imaloveofnuest
#10
Chapter 53: Thank you for reviewing 'A Royal Fantasy' , i will heed on your advice !! <3