Story: We Got Married

Author: imaloveofnuest

Genre: Romance, Idol Life, WGM

Reviewer: bibim-bap

Title: [2/5] Well, to be honest, it didn’t really make me want to read the story. I mean, we all know that We Got Married is a variety a show and a majority of people know what happens on the show – so it really won’t be much of an exciting plot to the readers. We know that two idols are going to star on a show. Being a fanfic, of course the main girl will fall in love with the guy and, here, it just kind of gives it away. It isn’t eye-grabbing. In other words, it sounded too predictable.

Appearance: [4/10] The poster was, well, okay. If it’s made by you then I’ll totally give you credit for doing your best but, if it wasn’t, then, in my opinion, the poster maker could’ve done better. I’m not a graphic review, but I know a decent poster when I see one. Not to offend you or anything but the poster is just a little on the sloppy side. The poster and the background did really suit with each other either.
Also, the neatness of your overall work was also on the messy side. I don’t really know if it’s some kind of style – but you put space before and after your punctuation marks. Since your writing is organized in an aligned way, it makes it seem messy. And since the dialogue was thrown into all the action, all the writing seemed a little bunched up and hard to read.

Description/Foreword: [6/10] The description was good. The bold letter just flipped me off. It was confusing since you made some made words bold, but sometimes forgot a few of the beginning letters. The spaces in between the punctuation marks were there too. But, as for the content, it was great – not too long, not too short (you don’t know how wrong that sounds), and doesn’t give away too much about the plot.<