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Story: Every Single Step

Author: trixyByuri

Genre: Angst

Reviewer: baekyeols

 

 

 

 

 

Story Title {2.5/5}:

At first glance, the title made me think of the main character overcoming problems in their life, or something along the lines of that; but after reading the story I dont really see the connection.

 

Appearance {6/10}:

Your background matched perfectly, but the poster seemed odd and out of place. It fitted a angst/romance theme, while your story is mostly angst. A black and white/dark  poster while fit the story more.

 

Description/Foreword {7/10}:

Your description isn't very long and didn't tell much, which is good since you didn't give the whole story away. But it seems a bit too short to actually get the reader to click the ‘next’ or ‘subscribe’ button.

 

Characters {12/15}:

The characters

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0verlord_Nim
#2
Would you like to be Affiliates?
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flamzfox
#3
Can we be affiliates (we're an review shop)?

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LadyofReincarnation
#4
Hello ^__^ Thank you very much for the graphic review!~
It was short yet simple and I loved the sincerity from the words. I had intended for Sulli to touch Luhan's face as if she was trying to annoy him (he looks quite annoyed in the picture too XD), and yeah :D
But other than that I had fun reading my review :)
Should I post the credit in a blog post, since I don't have an actual story for the graphic?
kaiura
#5
Chapter 57: Sorry I'm late picking my review up! I will credit the review shop within the next hour. I really appreciated the suggestions :)
Roochi
#6
Chapter 58: Thank you for the review! It was helpful.
I'll make sure to credit as soon as i get to use the pc :)
xiu_pao #7
Hello, may we be affiliated? ;u; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390445
CupieCakesx3
#8
Chapter 56: Thanks for the review ^^
king-gyu #9
Chapter 55: Thank you for the review :)
imaloveofnuest
#10
Chapter 53: Thank you for reviewing 'A Royal Fantasy' , i will heed on your advice !! <3