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Story: Every Single Step
Author: trixyByuri
Genre: Angst
Reviewer: baekyeols
Story Title {2.5/5}:
At first glance, the title made me think of the main character overcoming problems in their life, or something along the lines of that; but after reading the story I dont really see the connection.
Appearance {6/10}:
Your background matched perfectly, but the poster seemed odd and out of place. It fitted a angst/romance theme, while your story is mostly angst. A black and white/dark poster while fit the story more.
Description/Foreword {7/10}:
Your description isn't very long and didn't tell much, which is good since you didn't give the whole story away. But it seems a bit too short to actually get the reader to click the ‘next’ or ‘subscribe’ button.
Characters {12/15}:
The characters
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