Story: The Luhan Project

Genre: Romance, drama, comdedy

Reviewer: baekyeols

Story Title {5/5}:

It’s eye catching. I would click on the story if I was randomly scrolling through AFF and happened to see it. I searched your title up and so far it’s the only fanfic with that name so good job!

Appearance {2/10}:

The poster and background throws me off, and it doesn't fit the story whatsoever. At first glance, the poster says that the story will be dark, angst and drama. You might want a brighter poster. The chapter banners fits the mood perfectly though.

Description/Foreword {8/10}:

At first it did not give the whole plot away. But the next two sentences after the rules did. I can already tell that they are going to end up together, so you might want to take that part out.

Characters {10/15}:

Just by reading the foreword, I could already tell their personalities. Afterwards, Luhan seemed more arrogant than rude. Hye Sung isn't just stubborn, she is rightdown badass. I really like the characters because it isn'ta sweet loving person plus a cold bastard. The characters aren't developed yet though, I only know a few basic things about them. You might want to hint their interests and dislikes throughout the story so the reader understand the character more.

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