Story: Remember Me,Dara

Author: evilmagnae

Genre: Romance, Gangster

Reviewer: bibi-bap

Title [3/5]: Honestly, at first glance, I wasn’t exactly captured by the title. The title “Remember Me, Dara” made it obvious that it meant that either 1. Dara was going to forget or 2. G-Dragon might die. And, after reading it, yes Dara did forget. But, everything (like capitalization and grammar was fine) was fine.

Appearance [10/10]: Your poster, at the moment, is pretty much fine (I can’t say anything myself since I’m not the graphic reviewer here :P). You didn’t have a background, so I have no say in that. Also, your overall neatness of writing was really good too. Not many colors, spaces, etc. etc.

Description/Foreword [7/10]: The description was okay. It didn’t exactly get my attention. After reading it, I immediately thought about The Vow and The Notebook (which you later mentioned The Vow in your story). Try spicing things up a bit. The cliffhanger questions were a bit too answerable and p