Story: Novalis

Author: shizunebachi

Genre: Angst, War,

Reviewer: bibim-bap

Title [5/5]: Novalis was definitely a really good title for a story like this one. It wasn’t a really long one- it was kept simple with one word. It was an eye-catcher.

Appearance [9/10]: The overall appearance was fine. The only thing is, the poster was a bit confusing. At first glance, it would seem like the title was “Novalis This is War.” Instead of “This is war” being a quote. Besides that, everything was otherwise fine.

Description/Foreword [8/10]: You’re description was really well-written (descriptive and all) but it doesn’t seem to show off what the story meant. All Hongki is talking about is “war”- nothing else. It wasn’t as captivating as the plot really is. Try making it want to make readers click the next button. (Also, it would be better to put the description actually in the description area rather than the foreword)

Characters [12/15]: Characterization was great. Though,