Story: When the First Snow Fell

Author: falliblefantasy

Genre: Slight angst, tragedy, slice of life

Reviewer: cherrylisa

Story title (3/5): It sounds nice, very poetic –like and somehow pleasing yet sentimental for the ears. It gives off the impression of sad and melancholic. Even though it’s eye-catching, it isn’t a spot one, but the title did its best to catch my interest. It’s not strong like any other title out there, but likely it has some ways to catch my attention. It’s a simple title, basing the plot with it and the title has shared its contribution well in the story.

Appearance (9/10): The genres are displayed throughout, mild angst and melancholic. The vibe is nice, simple, enough and mild. Not too strong and thick that perfectly suits the story itself. The slice of life has been portrayed very well, giving off the moral and reality of life to the readers which definitely served its purpose very well. The poster is nice, simple and very creative. Very simple poster, but could have been better, in my opinion. The poster reflects the story, emphasizing one and two of the things that are important in the story. Simple and nice. The appearance of the story is neat and nothing seems to be  ut of the ordinary. Your writing style is very nice, placing more focus on narration, letting out the beauty of the genres and story through the narration. The dialogues are fine, complimenting the narration a lot, which I have no problem at all.

Description (8/10): The description is nice,; simple and alluring. The description didn’t say it all, but gave few hints which are fine. It’s simple and kind of poetic-like. Even though I find it a bit too simple, the description is really good. I would have liked it if there would be mysteriousness wrapping around the description to completely mark it off.

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