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Story: How Passion Brought Us Together

Author: SimplyCuddly

Genre: Comedy, Romance

Reviewer: baekyeols

 

 

 

Story Title {3/5}:

Personally the title doesn't attract me to read the story.

It gives away the storyline a bit and doesn't make me wonder what the story is about.

 

Appearance {10/10}:

The layout of the story is very neat and clean. Poster and background are both present

The current graphics of the story matches the story very well and stars make me feel really

comfortable while I’m reading.  

 

Description/Foreword {6/10}:

The description practically gave away the whole storyline. It’s a basic outline,

but the reader will know what will happen. I suggest taken out some parts so

the readers become curious and maybe throw in some excerpts from the first

few chapters. For me, I tend to want to read stories if there is a good description and

small glimpse of the fanfic.

 

 

Characters {13/15}:

I liked the characters and their personalities. I know that Hyejung is a tomboy

but you sometimes stress on that too much. 

 

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0verlord_Nim
#2
Would you like to be Affiliates?
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flamzfox
#3
Can we be affiliates (we're an review shop)?

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LadyofReincarnation
#4
Hello ^__^ Thank you very much for the graphic review!~
It was short yet simple and I loved the sincerity from the words. I had intended for Sulli to touch Luhan's face as if she was trying to annoy him (he looks quite annoyed in the picture too XD), and yeah :D
But other than that I had fun reading my review :)
Should I post the credit in a blog post, since I don't have an actual story for the graphic?
kaiura
#5
Chapter 57: Sorry I'm late picking my review up! I will credit the review shop within the next hour. I really appreciated the suggestions :)
Roochi
#6
Chapter 58: Thank you for the review! It was helpful.
I'll make sure to credit as soon as i get to use the pc :)
xiu_pao #7
Hello, may we be affiliated? ;u; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390445
CupieCakesx3
#8
Chapter 56: Thanks for the review ^^
king-gyu #9
Chapter 55: Thank you for the review :)
imaloveofnuest
#10
Chapter 53: Thank you for reviewing 'A Royal Fantasy' , i will heed on your advice !! <3