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Story: My Gorgeous Assassin
Author: Inspirit-Baby
Genre: Action/ Romance
Reviewer: bibim-bap
Story Title: 5/5
I was immediately interested when I saw “My Gorgeous Assassin.” It obviously meant some action (and I like that).
Appearance: 9/10
At first, your poster and background we fine. But, later into the story, you changed your poster to match your background. A simple pattern background or title background would’ve been fine.
Description/Foreword: 8/10
You’re overall description was fine. Just, you could’ve put the description actually in the description area and save the author’s note and characters for the foreword. You want readers to be captured by what the story is about first then introduce yourself and how you got the idea.
Characters: 12/15
Since you basically
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