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Story: My Gorgeous Assassin

Author: Inspirit-Baby

Genre: Action/ Romance

Reviewer: bibim-bap

 

 

Story Title: 5/5

I was immediately interested when I saw “My Gorgeous Assassin.” It obviously meant some action (and I like that).


Appearance: 9/10

At first, your poster and background we fine. But, later into the story, you changed your poster to match your background. A simple pattern background or title background would’ve been fine.
 

Description/Foreword: 8/10

You’re overall description was fine. Just, you could’ve put the description actually in the description area and save the author’s note and characters for the foreword. You want readers to be captured by what the story is about first then introduce yourself and how you got the idea.


Characters: 12/15

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0verlord_Nim
#2
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Can we be affiliates (we're an review shop)?

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LadyofReincarnation
#4
Hello ^__^ Thank you very much for the graphic review!~
It was short yet simple and I loved the sincerity from the words. I had intended for Sulli to touch Luhan's face as if she was trying to annoy him (he looks quite annoyed in the picture too XD), and yeah :D
But other than that I had fun reading my review :)
Should I post the credit in a blog post, since I don't have an actual story for the graphic?
kaiura
#5
Chapter 57: Sorry I'm late picking my review up! I will credit the review shop within the next hour. I really appreciated the suggestions :)
Roochi
#6
Chapter 58: Thank you for the review! It was helpful.
I'll make sure to credit as soon as i get to use the pc :)
xiu_pao #7
Hello, may we be affiliated? ;u; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390445
CupieCakesx3
#8
Chapter 56: Thanks for the review ^^
king-gyu #9
Chapter 55: Thank you for the review :)
imaloveofnuest
#10
Chapter 53: Thank you for reviewing 'A Royal Fantasy' , i will heed on your advice !! <3