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Title: Wolf's Bane

Genre: Angst, suspense, romance

Reviewer: bibim-bap

 

 

 

Title: [4/5] At first glance, the title “Wolf’s Bane” didn’t exactly grab my attention. I mean, with the title wolf it tells that the story, of course, is circulating around the wolf era. And, with the whole wolves thing, it’s kind of common now that EXO themselves had a comeback with the same theme. But, there was another interpretation I had. Wolf’s Bane is a type of flower that’s poisonous (?). I might be wrong, but it would take my view of the story differently.


Appearance: [10/10] Your appearance was kept simple. The background was black, matching with your otherwise simple poster. The way you organized the content of the story was kept at default so, I give you a full score for that.


Description/Foreword: [7/10] To be honest, the description didn’t really hit it off that well. It was well written and left a cliffhanger, but it wasn’t really enough to make me click the next button. There should’ve been more, in-depth explanation. So what about secrets? I don’t even know enough to actually get a good grasp of what exactly is going to happen. I’m saying to be too predictable but, at least some information to back the readers because no reader would read a story without knowing what the heck is going on.
The foreword, in contrast with the description, gave some info about Chanyeol and Kris. Though, it said in the description about the other members being involved as well. But, I think you did a good job port

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0verlord_Nim
#2
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LadyofReincarnation
#4
Hello ^__^ Thank you very much for the graphic review!~
It was short yet simple and I loved the sincerity from the words. I had intended for Sulli to touch Luhan's face as if she was trying to annoy him (he looks quite annoyed in the picture too XD), and yeah :D
But other than that I had fun reading my review :)
Should I post the credit in a blog post, since I don't have an actual story for the graphic?
kaiura
#5
Chapter 57: Sorry I'm late picking my review up! I will credit the review shop within the next hour. I really appreciated the suggestions :)
Roochi
#6
Chapter 58: Thank you for the review! It was helpful.
I'll make sure to credit as soon as i get to use the pc :)
xiu_pao #7
Hello, may we be affiliated? ;u; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390445
CupieCakesx3
#8
Chapter 56: Thanks for the review ^^
king-gyu #9
Chapter 55: Thank you for the review :)
imaloveofnuest
#10
Chapter 53: Thank you for reviewing 'A Royal Fantasy' , i will heed on your advice !! <3