Story: A Royal Fantasy

Author: imaloveofnuest

Genre: Love, Action, Ancient China, Royal Family

Reviewer: baekyeols

Story Title {5/5}:

It suits the story well and at first glance, it made me want to read the fanfic. The title is unique and if you search it up it’s the only fanfic on Asianfanfics that have that title.

Appearance {8/10}:

Poster and background present. (Am I supposed to grade my own graphics? ) The presentation of the story is neat and easy to follow. I docked two  point because of a few reason that I will mention later.

Description/Foreword {6/10}:

Description: It is a bit confusing and I think you gave too much away. The way you formatted it made it obviously what was going to happen, I just think you could take some things out so the reader anticipates more.

Foreword: The character profiles isn't necessary, it would be best to reveal what the character are like in the fanfic rather than listing them out. I would suggest explaining what all the historical terms mean, since not everyone will understand Chinese; this way you don't have to explain throughout the story, which you did a few times and it throws off the flow. All of EXO-M’s specialities and character are revealed in the first few chapters so it it also not necessary to have a profile for them. Honestl