Story: The Imaginary Owns The Heart

Author: ZenHearts

Genre: Romance, Angst

Reviewer: cherrylisa

Story title (5/5): The title is unique, beautiful and extraordinary. It’s quite vague, in my opinion when I first saw your title. But when I read the plot, the title definitely marked the plot. It’s a spot-on for angst and psychological readers and very eye-catching and perks one curiosity. It ties down the whole plot together and isn’t left out. It contributed well to the story and somehow gave the twisty plot and feelings.

Appearance (9/10): The genres are being well distributed throughout the plot. Feels are all over the place and the awe, shattering of heart, slight fluffiness feeling and romance is in the air and yeah, you pulled it out greatly.

The poster is great, beautiful, in fact, but I suggest the font of the title to be changed. I thought there was gore or something but it turns out, that there is none. There are other fonts that could be used for a psychological story and the present font title is no-no. The background colour is okay, matching up the genres very well especially the main genres. The placing of pictures and the pick is very well organized and well-picked. 

In conclusion for the poster, it gave out the mysterious, haunting and slightly angsty feel to the readers and it matched the story very well.

The writing style is neat, organized and isn’t well-detailed which is by the way you pulled of greatly. I should have been telling you to put some more details but the way you guys write is simply stunning and those simple words that you used seems to hold more and contains a lot deep inside. I would suggest that you could have put up the haunting feeling throughout the story by adding more details, but by the fact that you pulled everything so beautifully and that I’m still mending my heart back.

You guys did a great job.

Description (9/10): The description is great, I tell you. It allures people, really and it has this odd feelings and vibe that somehow hypnotizes people in and also makes people curious about the story itself. The description is simple, plain and kind of off to the plot. I sensed something is missing, something that is lacking from the description but I couldn’t point what it is. But other than that, none.

Characters (15/15): The characters, my friends, have been played out beautifully throughout the storyline. You stood up their personality, their disorder and how they lived from the start until the end and I applaud, you guys for that. You exposed their past and background throughout the story, not rushed nor slow. Just on the right