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Theme: Cute, Happy
Reviewer: baekyeols
First Impression {5/10}:
The color mashed together and it was hard to see the title. Seems like there is so much going on but it also seems like there’s nothing there.
Mood/Theme {8/10}:
Your theme was happy/ cute and it was achieved through full body shots and a patterned background. The outline of the characters and the title really gave off a neel comedic feel.However, the colors are a bit darker than what a normal happy poster would look like.
I lightened and adjusted the colors a bit:
Composition {9/10}:
The two characters are placed in the middle of the poster so I don't see any problem with that. The credit seems a bit awkward on the side so you can place it in the middle, like the poster I edited above. You can always make the white box bigger if you feel like placing it right underneath the title looks crowded.
Font {13/15}:
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