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Theme: Cute, Happy

Reviewer: baekyeols

 

 

 

 

 

First Impression {5/10}:

The color mashed together and it was hard to see the title. Seems like there is so much going on but it also seems like there’s nothing there.

 

Mood/Theme {8/10}:

Your theme was happy/ cute and it was achieved through full body shots and a patterned background. The outline of the characters and the title really gave off a neel comedic feel.However, the colors are a bit darker than what a normal happy poster would look like.

I lightened and adjusted the colors a bit:

 

Composition {9/10}:

The two characters are placed in the middle of the poster so I don't see any problem with that. The credit seems a bit awkward on the side so you can place it in the middle, like the poster I edited above. You can always make the white box bigger if you feel like placing it right underneath the title looks crowded.

 

 

Font {13/15}:

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0verlord_Nim
#2
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flamzfox
#3
Can we be affiliates (we're an review shop)?

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LadyofReincarnation
#4
Hello ^__^ Thank you very much for the graphic review!~
It was short yet simple and I loved the sincerity from the words. I had intended for Sulli to touch Luhan's face as if she was trying to annoy him (he looks quite annoyed in the picture too XD), and yeah :D
But other than that I had fun reading my review :)
Should I post the credit in a blog post, since I don't have an actual story for the graphic?
kaiura
#5
Chapter 57: Sorry I'm late picking my review up! I will credit the review shop within the next hour. I really appreciated the suggestions :)
Roochi
#6
Chapter 58: Thank you for the review! It was helpful.
I'll make sure to credit as soon as i get to use the pc :)
xiu_pao #7
Hello, may we be affiliated? ;u; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390445
CupieCakesx3
#8
Chapter 56: Thanks for the review ^^
king-gyu #9
Chapter 55: Thank you for the review :)
imaloveofnuest
#10
Chapter 53: Thank you for reviewing 'A Royal Fantasy' , i will heed on your advice !! <3