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Story: Push, Play, Rewind

Author: asianswagg

Genre: Comedy, drama

Reviewer: baekyeols

 

 

 

 

Story Title {5/5}:

I really liked the title the moment I saw it. I’m guessing the story is broken down into the three parts, based on the chapter titles. The title is pretty original, I searched it up and there were no other fanfics with the same title.

 

Appearance {9/10}:

The poster and background are both really cute and well made. I just think that although the background matches the poster, it doesn't match the story itself.

The general display of the story is neat and easy to follow. There are no harsh colors or unnecessary bolding which I am grateful for.

 

Description/Foreword {8/10}:

The description gave away a lot but it was the general idea of the fanfic so I think it’s fine. It was short but it was enough to keep a reader reading. There wasn't much in the foreword except the credits, which I think the reviewers and graphic designers will appreciate. The little author note and signature at the end was really ute.

 

Characters {13/15}:

The characters are the most important part of a story, and I think that Jonghyun and Key are well written. Jonghyun was really irritated but after he met Key the irritation went away? I just think that it

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0verlord_Nim
#2
Would you like to be Affiliates?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/456595
flamzfox
#3
Can we be affiliates (we're an review shop)?

On Glory's Edge
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/514481/
LadyofReincarnation
#4
Hello ^__^ Thank you very much for the graphic review!~
It was short yet simple and I loved the sincerity from the words. I had intended for Sulli to touch Luhan's face as if she was trying to annoy him (he looks quite annoyed in the picture too XD), and yeah :D
But other than that I had fun reading my review :)
Should I post the credit in a blog post, since I don't have an actual story for the graphic?
kaiura
#5
Chapter 57: Sorry I'm late picking my review up! I will credit the review shop within the next hour. I really appreciated the suggestions :)
Roochi
#6
Chapter 58: Thank you for the review! It was helpful.
I'll make sure to credit as soon as i get to use the pc :)
xiu_pao #7
Hello, may we be affiliated? ;u; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390445
CupieCakesx3
#8
Chapter 56: Thanks for the review ^^
king-gyu #9
Chapter 55: Thank you for the review :)
imaloveofnuest
#10
Chapter 53: Thank you for reviewing 'A Royal Fantasy' , i will heed on your advice !! <3