First Impression: Taking a look at the title, I assumed the story was not going to be told in a typical point of view since it is "How I shipped BaekYeol". I admit it is a unique take on but there are risks to it which I will later discuss. The main poster is very eye appealing and kawaii as I might say it. Description looks acceptable length wise but the foreword might need some effort.

Story Title: Like I said in the previous paragraph, the story title induces a different point of view which is unique. However, the point of view can be a turn off for a majority of readers unless you know how to pull it off. The fact that it was a Baekyeol story automatically screamed fluff at me and I couldn't wait to read their cute love journey.

Graphics: I adore the poster and how you highlighted the words you wanted to emphasize in the description. The pastel colors used in the poster and description went well with each other and created a poppy and colorful theme. I notice that there was no background picture. The layout is simple and neat but I think that a background would do the story justice as well. No need to rush finding one but I'm sure you could find a background out there to make your layout more filling. While reading, I think it's nice to have a pop of pictures on the side so it doesn't look boring but I know some people who prefer plain white as well.

Description and foreword: I say that the description length was perfect, not too long nor too short. However, I was a little confused at the end where:

"You know what, girl? You are the first friend I met here."

I feel like it should have been a Baekyeol scene instead of HyemiXChanyeol.

The description is suppose to be like a thesis or hook that creates excitement to lure readers into your story. As much as it was informational, it was anti-climatic for me. The foreword should contain more than credits to your poster maker and advertisers. Putting more details in like "Why did you make this story?" "What inspired you?" etc...

Plot / flow / orginality: At first, I thought the plot was going to be cute and fluffy judging from first impression but totally not what I expected. I saw comedy in the tag and wanted to take it out because I honestly did not laugh while reading this story. I suppose the comedy parts are when Hyemi gets hit by Baekhyun or the girl references but I cringed instead. I like that you included the flashback trick that writers use on us gullible readers but if your intention was to suprise than it wa