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BIBIMBAP/KAWAII REVIEW SHOP ARCHIVETitle : 꽃 Flower
Reviewer : sweet_chocolate98
First Impression
When I saw the title , I thought it would be a sad story about a girl who had a terrible past.. But , when I look into all the chapters , I get the unexpected.. The story came out nice..
Title
I like the way you put the korean word there.. I understand that 'Kim Soyoung' means a beautiful flower.. But in the story , you didn't talk much about that characteristic... It somehow potrayed sadness and it fits the story well..
Graphics
OMG! I like the poster and the background! I love it so much!! I like how Sehun look at the OC in the poster and the korean word in the poster.. it's JUST SO WOAH! It somehow fits the story well.. I like it very much~
Description and Foreword
About your description , it's simple and short which I like it.. But when the part , "But in the end, I am only a flower.” I hope you add more like what a flower had been through.. Like being stepped on or being picked or being tortured.. And about your foreword , adding more colours should make the story more inter
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