Title: Chunji Is My Bestfriend

Reviewed by: Christine3006

First impression : 

         When  I first read your story, I think its kinda boring. I think you should add more things in your description and foreword. The poster that you are using is really connected to the story and I love that ^^ and I think this story is too colorful o u o

Story title : 

         The story title is good enough but I think its better for you if you make a more specific title because when people saw your title, they will know that the main character is Chunji. Like: A difficult love or anything else but don’t include the name of the character in the Title dear c:

Graphics : 

I really love your poster ^o^ but the thing is you should make the poster and the background connected. For me, I prevered using the same poster and background so that it looked nicer or you can request the same colour/theme background from the graphics shop^^

Description and foreword : 

         I think you need to make the descriptions in the same fonts so it won’t be confusing and please avoid using so many colors ouo

         There was some grammar mistakes in the descriptions but I’ll talk about it later in the Grammar part ^^

         The foreword, which is where you put the introduction of the characters, I think you should make