Title: Iridescence

Reviewed by: AzHiie

You ship a rare EXO pairing so it’s secretly a plus for me.

First impression:

Simple and clean – like how short stories are normally supposed to be.

Story title:

Good enough; it’s unique, despite having only one word and would make the readers do the effort of searching up the dictionary. You have perfect marks in terms of relevance to the story.

Description and foreword:

It’s normal. It’s the proper way to introduce a short story, just like how I do my one-shots as well – having only a single sentence in the description and an author’s note in the foreword.

It would definitely make one-shot readers like me want to read the story after reading that one sentence; I like it.

Plot / flow / originality:

It’s a simple, beautiful plot. The type of story where there aren’t any major conflicts; just the compilation of little stories of what Luhan goes through regularly with Kris. It’s peaceful and calming, yet sorrowing and tear-jerking at the same time. I suggest you add the following tags to the story: fluff, angst, romance and sliceoflife.

I apologize, but I honestly have not much to say. It’s perfect. If anything, better than perfect – I’m not exaggerating. This deserves to be in fiction recommendations after it’s completed.

Grammar:

Other than reducing your dashes to a