Title: Choose Your Poison

Reviewed by: exoexoexolellel

First impression (5/5)

Neat and simple. Engaging for a one-shot.

Story title (10/10)

The title is significant and attracts attention. It sounds alluring and dangerous. It's currently the only fanfic with that title and it's interesting how you have revolved your story around it.

Graphics (4/5)

It's better if you get an actual poster with the title though I can't mark you harshly since it's a one shot and all. The picture is good quality and features the two main characters in a quite ual position so thumbs up for that. And it's not like I imagined myself sitting in between those hot bodies, not at all.

I don't think backgrounds are necessary for one shots, so it's just the poster.

Description and foreword (10/10)

It's brief and perfect for a one shot. You reveal enough to get readers interested. I think the part that got me going was when you said "Need I say more?" because I felt like you were taunting me and in that way, you weren't really giving me a choice. I like that.

Plot / flow / originality (20/20)

I really like how you made Kai bottom seeing as he's always portrayed as the y dominant one. Giving Sehun the control really engages the readers, since he's the younger one as well. The flow is great, flawless really. When people write it in the genre, they rush everything to the point where the characters have their . You have done the opposite, prolonging the in the most detailed concept, adding a few new ideas such as the cork one.

Grammar (18/20)

Your one-shot has almost perfect grammar and it was really difficult for me to pick out flaws. I only managed to a few.

Note; the sentences in italics are quotes from your story. The words in bold are the corrections I've made. {{Braces}} indicate paragraphs t