Title: Rain

Reviewed by: exoexoexolellel

First impression

Just by looking at the title, I thought that I would be in for a very angsty story. Your description freaked me out though...

Story title

It's appealing though I don't think I have to check to know that there are many other fanfictions titled the same as yours. I have no idea how you are going to merge your title into your story, though I do have a sense that the rain might be a bad omen?

Graphics

The graphics are great; aesthetically appealing and it produces the angsty feel you would want readers to experience. I definitely felt it while reading your story.

Description and foreword

It is all quite engaging though I'd say the excerpt you have drawed out from your story is a little too long for the reader's eyes. There are two mistakes in the sneakpeek:

Quote: Then her skin started pealing off and looking tattered.

Correction: Then her skin started peeling off, giving a tattered look.

There shoud also be a period after "Help".

Plot / flow / originalit