Title : Forever With You 

Reviewer : Taehyung (christine3006)

First impression

Your story somehow reminded me of "With You" song<33 and your poster is too perf<3

Story title 

Your title seems to be common but well, it suits the story very very well! But you don't have to capitalize the 'With' because it is a preposition. so it must be "Forever with You"

Graphics 

Your poster and background looks angst and not too bright/dark. PERFECT.

Description and foreword

Your description is short but meaningful;3 Maybe you should add some pics of the characters in your foreword to make it not too empty.

Plot / flow / originality 

This is my very first time reading this kind of plot. and yas, It contains angst element and a little dose of supernatural (since Luhan and Xiumin are angels). The story flows and arranged nicely! thumbs up for that!

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