Title : Monster

Reviewer : Christine3006

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First impression : okay so I have to tell you that your title is kinda unique and attracting every reader. Even I don't really ship them but your title makes me wanting to know more and more. But I think that your foreword is too plain. But when I was about to read chapter 1, i noticed so many paragraph and to be honest, I think you should split them because not everyone is willing to read this kind of fanfic that contains so many paragraph.

 

Story title : As what I have mentioned before, your title got no problem *thumbs up*

 

Graphics : I don't really think that your graphics is kinda suitable to the story like you should have the poster with the story title. And I think that your story is kind of angst story? I suggested you to have a kind of dark poster so it'll be more attracting and eye-catching.

 

Description and foreword : your description seems okay, but I have to say that I'm not satisfied with the foreword. why? because usually Foreword are where you describe the characters not authors note . You can just put the author's note after you have written the introduction of the characters. Like for example : what type of girl is chaerin, and a picture for each characters seems good too. And I think you can add some meaningful lyrics from Monster's song in the descri