Title : My Life Changes With a Little Help from a Fortune Cookie
Reviewer : hyeong

First impression:

I'm actually not a big fan of stories with long titles, so I was a bit reluctant as I was doing your review. But I like the fan-art, by the way. 
 

Story title: It's too long for me. But I guess if your readers like that, then all is good. 

 

Graphics: A+. I really love the edit okay. I can't edit all that well. 

 

Description and foreword: This is going to be a bit meticulous so please bear with me.

Firstly, you have some common spelling mistakes in your description. But we all go through that phase, don't worry about it, girl.

"Park Hana is a normal 18 year old girl who lives in downtown Seoull, South Korea with her parents and little sister Haeun. She dreams of being a singer but her family aren't rich enough to send her to a proper singing school...Kim Seoyeon is also 18 but she is a spoilt brat and only child of a very rich buisness man and attends SM High School of perfoming arts, the IT school in South Korea, majoring in dance. At first glance Hana and Seoyeon have nothing in commen appart from their ages...but on one dull Friday afternoon all that is about to change with the help of a very strange fortune cookie."

You accidentally typed Seoull instead of Seoul. And 'commen' instead of 'common'. One more thing: 'appart' instead of 'apart'. Now I would understand if these spelling mistakes were made because you type too fast, but I suggest re-reading your work before publishing it. If there's a red line underneath a word, right click it, and it s