Title : Flower Girl

Reviewer : Christine3006

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First impression :

Your story really attracted me both by the title and the poster which is really eye-catching. Especially the main character is L since I like L being an arogant guy :p. and I like your writing style, dialogues and p.o.v~

Story title : Good, it automatically describes that the girl is connected to flowers^^

Graphics : your poster and background is just too jjang *^*

Description and foreword : your description and foreword is kinda simple and clear but theres a-bit error here:

maybe you should add more information in each members of Infinite in your foreword?

Plot / flow / orginality : yes, I never read this kind of plot before, and I really like how you describe their personalities and characteristics from their dialogues^^

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