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Title : I am Happy to Love You

Reviewer : hyeong
 


First impression: I'm a fan of work, so when I saw that your fic was , I immediately thought that I was going to like it. 

Story title: It could have been more unique, but again, as I have said with my previous fanfic reviews, if it works with the story then by all means, keep the title just as it is.

Graphics: A bit simple. If the title says "I am Happy to Love You", then you should have chosen happier photos of the main characters. That was just a suggestion, though. 

Description and foreword: Now this one I'm excited to review. When I read your description, it hit close to home. It was just...too personal for me to read the description of your story. I felt the connection between me and the story, therefore I know that I will like it. And you've

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darkclov3r #1
Hi there;

Chaptered story / one-shot: Chaptered story

Author's username: darkclov3r

Author link: Chaptered story / one-shot:

Author's username: darkclov3r

Author link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/595333

Story title: The Primary; The Secondary

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/748326/the-primary-the-secondary-angst-crime-exoshidae-baeksica-kaisica

Short description of your story: My days are called Primary and Secondary. To remind and punish me for being a malevolent sister.

Chapter count (for those with more than one chapter only): 2

Genre: angst,slideoflife,tragedy

Story contains M-rated scenes: No

Status: On-going

Reviewer : AzHiie

What you want to be focused on: pace, grammar-wise

Password: bibimbap

Thanks in advance.