Title : The Game of the Maze

Reviewer : Taehyung

First impression

When I saw your poster's quote: "Every twist brings new dangers and every turn may bring death." It somehow reminds me of Hunger Games movie, oho.

Story title

The title is somehow common but it gaves the readers think about a game, not a love story or something like that. Good job!

Graphics

Black and simple, it suits the story a lot!
 

Description and foreword

You made the description more like the form/rules of that game. It's kinda interesting but it'll be more eye catching if you left side of your plot there and make it cliff hangers so it'll attract readers.

Plot / flow / originality

This is my very first time reading a plot like yours. The plot is similar to Hunger Games + Divergent, applause for you!:3 

Writing style/Grammar

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