Title: Thrown Aside

Reviewer: Rogue-Renegade

First impression

I thought it was something very fresh, and something that has never been done before as far as I knew. I also thought that it was a little weird, and that maybe I wouldn't like it. 

Title 

The title was perfect! It portrayed the sadness and hopelessness of the whole story very well. I must admit when I first saw it I thought it was going to be an abuse story, but having read it it fit the story very well. 

Graphics 

It was an okay graphics, but I saw a few things in it that threw me off. It was a obvious that the story was going to feature a dog based on the poster, but I thought there would also be a human named Yongjae because he was in the poster as a human. Also, the two backgrounds didn't match up well, and it may just be me, but it is funny to see everything floating in the center like that. The proportions were good though, and I like how the dog was sitting next to Daehyun. 

Description and Forword

Your description was too simple, and yet it was confusing because of some of the ways you wrote. It was lyrical, so I won't gedge the grammar as it seems it was meant to be poetry, but you might want to reread it. 

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