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BIBIMBAP/KAWAII REVIEW SHOP ARCHIVETitle : Flowers and Hopes
Reviewer : Taehyung
First impression
Your foreword was really neat and yas, I love it<3 I like it how you made it short but meaningful. So yeah~ good job:3
Story title
Your title was cute but somehow common. Make the meaning deeper~ like for example, "The hopefull friendship". But it's okay xD. Each person got a different taste.
Graphics
Your poster kinda dissappointed me tbh. Why don't you include some of the cast in your poster? It might look great tho:3 But not the background because its P-E-R-F-E-C-T
Description and foreword
You arranged the foreword nicely and really neat. I like it how you slipped one quote there. You got no problem here, so good job!
Plot / flow / originality
Since your story was a one-shoted one, I can't really judge your flows. But the story plot was nice, no lovey dovey, but friendship:3
Grammar
You don't really have grammatical error. Ju
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