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Title : Flowers and Hopes

Reviewer : Taehyung 

First impression 

Your foreword was really neat and yas, I love it<3 I like it how you made it short but meaningful. So yeah~ good job:3

Story title 

Your title was cute but somehow common. Make the meaning deeper~ like for example, "The hopefull friendship". But it's okay xD. Each person got a different taste.

Graphics 

Your poster kinda dissappointed me tbh. Why don't you include some of the cast in your poster? It might look great tho:3 But not the background because its P-E-R-F-E-C-T

Description and foreword

You arranged the foreword nicely and really neat. I like it how you slipped one quote there. You got no problem here, so good job!

Plot / flow / originality 

Since your story was a one-shoted one, I can't really judge your flows. But the story plot was nice, no lovey dovey, but friendship:3 

Grammar 

You don't really have grammatical error. Ju

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darkclov3r #1
Hi there;

Chaptered story / one-shot: Chaptered story

Author's username: darkclov3r

Author link: Chaptered story / one-shot:

Author's username: darkclov3r

Author link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/595333

Story title: The Primary; The Secondary

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/748326/the-primary-the-secondary-angst-crime-exoshidae-baeksica-kaisica

Short description of your story: My days are called Primary and Secondary. To remind and punish me for being a malevolent sister.

Chapter count (for those with more than one chapter only): 2

Genre: angst,slideoflife,tragedy

Story contains M-rated scenes: No

Status: On-going

Reviewer : AzHiie

What you want to be focused on: pace, grammar-wise

Password: bibimbap

Thanks in advance.