I Don't Remember You by KaiHolic98

Reviewed by XOEXOSupFanFan

First impression (5/5) My impression was actually good, when I finished reading and looking at the description/foreward page I thought it would be some sort of amnesia tragic love story that has to do with painful goodbyes. However, that wasn't exactly what the story was about, at all lol.   Story title (7/10) To start things off, your title isn't something new and unique. I searched up your title and I've found 3 other stories with the same title. Lastly, so far it doesn't seem like your title shows any connection towards your story? Like I don't see any amnesia or short term memory where any of the characters forget one another. If there is a connection, but I somehow didn't see it, please point it out to me :)   Graphics (4/5) Well I don't see something horribly bad about your poster, everything seems to be blended in pretty decently, I'm guessing the background with the dancing partners is like a symbol for Jongin's and Sumin's relationship? It's just I don't see any special meaning to it for the story itself, therefore I am taking off one point.   Description and foreword (8/10) Your description and foreward is done very nicely, but I didn't really get an idea as to how it related to the plot. Like it gave me the impression of leaving and heartbreak. So far, from all the chapters that I have read, there isn't any super emotional goodbyes/heartbreaks going on. I mean there is JongIn's and Sumin's drama, but I'm guessing they made up since they got a bit busy in the bedroom ;) Then there is Baekhyun, he became a kpop artist right? But there was something about him leaving and not telling Sumin? I'm still left hanging on that, so I don't know if that is related to the description and foreward. The only reason why I didn't give you a lower score is because I feel like theres more to come in your story.    Plot / flow / originality (10/20) Let us first disscuss your plot, it is pretty cliche, like most of it is recycled a lot. 1. Two friends liking the same girl. 2. Little sister hating the main girl. 3. Screwing up by kissing your lover's friend. 4. Car crash accident. 5. Leaving temporarily for consultation with friend about feelings. Those were all in your story and they were so familiar to me, so I kind of predicted it before it even happened. However, that isn't such a bad thing becuase cliche is a good thing, sometimes. Flow wise, at first I thought it was fine, but suddenly everything felt so rushed after Jongin apologized for his misunderstanding. There was even a time when I felt Baekhyun's first confession to Sumin was rushed too, like she just got confessed by Jongin, it's kind of too much of Baekhyun to confess as well right after. It was also really rushed when Jongin asked Sumin to marry him when they barely graduated, I was like WHAT?? ALREADY?? Originality, I'm going to be honest, I didn't see anything special about your story that stood out. I mean it is your own story that you made up, but I felt like I've seen many stories like yours before. I think it is always important to have your own little twist to your story, but I of course shouldn't be contradicting myself since I'm not even doing that lol. I'm sure there is more to your story though, keep it up :)   Grammar (5/20) I'm going to be very honest with you, there were some sentences that I h