Title: Change

Reviewed by: exoexoexolellel

First impression

The title drew me in and the graphic sparked curiousity in me. As short as it is, the description definitely intrigued me.

Story title

One word titles are a pull in for me and it's quite appealing. It's quite obvious how the title is connected to the story so well done.

Graphics

It's not something I've seen before as most posters are quite sophisticated and detailed. Yours is quite plain; I like it.

Description and foreword

It's interesting to see how you have summed up your one-shot in just two sentences. You haven't worded it to be appealing and engaging so it's left to be a simple brief sypnosis, which is totally fine.

Plot / flow / originality

The plot is quite interesting and simple, perfect for a one shot. Personally, I found it quite boring as I felt that you didn't develop the feelings with Geun enough. I found the plot went way too fast and that you should have slowed it down during the chase and when Yongguk was eating. The ending, where they both admitted they needed each other definitely shocked me and I think you will need to work on that part; elaborate on it. There are many stories where the main character soughts to save another from suicide but how you created definitely makes your one-shot distinctive and original.

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