Chance to Meet My Umma   Title: Chance to Meet My Umma Author: springmiya Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Sping1/ Story URL: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/433012/chance-to-meet-my-umma-changmin-drama-junsu-yoosu-yunjae-mpreg Reviewed by: ilee Requested at: Sweet Lemon   1. Title: 5/5
The title is very fitting to the story of course ;)

2. Poster/background: 4/5
I think the blurry effect on the poster really correlates with the feel of the story. I think it was really cool and a great idea. The only problem I had was, I couldn't read the text on the poster. So I would have liked it even more if the blur was toned down so the faces could be seen a little more and so the text is readable. The background was a fine choice.

3. Foreword: 10/10 The foreword was good. There wasn't too much, or too little. Perfect!   4. Plot: 15/15 I'm still not sure how I feel about the whole men being able to be pregnant. I mean, it's not physically possible, but I guess this is a fanfic lol. Half the time I actually imagine Jaejoong and Junsu as legit girls hahaha. Anyways, I liked the plot. Personally, I think there could have been more to the story than what you already have there, like in the middle during the process of Yunho and Jaejoong getting back together. The story is pretty good as it is now though.   5. Creative/Originality: 15/15 I don't see many stories similar to yours, so I give you full points! I think overall, I really liked your ideas. You combined all your ideas very well, such as time-