Day 7

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family seven   Jonghyun is a smart kid. Dad has told him this so often. This is why he shows three fingers and grins proudly when his grandmother asks him how old he is now.

"Three!" he says and Dad ruffles his hair. Jonghyun is more than satisfied. His grandmother smiles at him before she shows him three fingers as well.

"You're three years old?" she asks again. Jonghyun is pretty sure his grandmother must be stupid by now - it's the a-number-Jonghyun-can't-count-to time she has asked him how old he is. He doesn't say anything though because Dad will be disappointed and Jonghyun doesn't like it when Dad is disappointed. He is just going to ask Daddy Bum later. Instead, he just nods and smiles wide before he turns to his Dad and takes his hand. Dad looks down on Jonghyun and when Jonghyun tugs a little, he finally sits down.

"What is it Jonghyunnie?" Dad asks. Jonghyun pouts a little because Dad is weak to Jonghyun's pouts. Jonghyun knows this because whenever Daddy Bum is mad and won't let him do stuff, he just has to ask Dad and whine a little. It always works. He heard Daddy Bum tell Dad that he shouldn't give in to Jonghyunnie but Jonghyun doesn't care because he gets what he wants anyway.

"Jonghyunnie wants to play!" Jonghyun tells his Dad and points to the playground. Daddy Bum doesn't like it when they're at playgrounds because he's scared Jonghyunnie will get a boo-boo (Jonghyun thinks Daddy Bum is stupid, he can totally handle a boo-boo, he's not a small kid anymore) but Daddy Bum isn't here so he hopes he can trick Dad into letting him go and let grandmother be alone. He doesn't want to tell her how old he is anymore. Dad just smiles and nods.

"Go play," he says and Jonghyun's eyes widen before he sprints off. He doesn't hear Dad's warning. Jonghyunnie gets a new friend. His name is also Jonghyun and they spend a good two hours playing. When Jonghyun wants to go swinging, he agrees. It's not until friend-Jonghyun jumps off the swing that everything goes wrong. Friend-Jonghyun lands on his legs but Jonghyun doesn't. Instead, he scrapes his knee.

Dad doesn't see it and Jonghyun tries really really really hard not to cry. But it hurts. It hurts a lot and he gets teary-eyed. When Dad finally notices he isn't even hurrying. Jonghyun wants to hate Dad. But Dad blows on is boo-boo and kisses him and Jonghyun also wants to curl into him and cry. So he does. Daddy Bum scolds Dad when they come home but Jonghyun gets a nice superman bandaid on his knee so he is okay. He tells Daddy Bum that.

"I wasn't even crying Daddy! It doesn't hurt! I'm okay! Can I play with Minhonie?" He runs off before he hears the answer.



Jonghyun finds Daddy Bum in the study room with all the books and the fun machine he sometimes plays on. Daddy Bum is playing with colors. Jonghyun knows this because he can name them all! Blue and yellow and green and red and that color in the rainbow that Jonghyun can't quite remember right now but knows nonetheless. "Daddy!" he says and Daddy Bum turns in the chair and smiles at him. "Yes Jonghyun?" he asks and Jonghyun points to the colors on the machine. Daddy Bum do
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !