Day 56B

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family fiftysix b Kibum worries about Taemin as he watches the teenager hurry into his room after school and slam the door closed. It’s not Taemin’s need for time alone that bothers Kibum, it’s the fact that it’s so unlike Taemin. He doesn’t bring Jongin home anymore, hasn’t for the past few weeks and that’s even more unusual. There is something wrong, Kibum reasons, and it worries him.

Taemin doesn’t want to talk to him, however. Every time he tries to bring it up or he asks when he’s going to hang out with Jongin again, Taemin dodges the question and scurries off to isolate himself in his room again. There is something wrong and Kibum wants to know what it is, wants to know how to help. There is nothing he wouldn’t do to help his children, if only they would talk to him.



“Taemin, we’re eating,” he says to the closed door to Taemin’s room and gets a “coming” from the other side. Taemin doesn’t emerge while Kibum stands there, however. It takes a minute or two where Kibum just stands, hoping to catch Taemin, but it’s like the boy has a detector that warns him of Kibum’s presence. In the end, he gives up and goes to join his husband at the dinner table. Taemin doesn’t emerge until Jinki knocks on his door and tells him that it’s now or no dinner. Kibum swallows down his worries as he sends Taemin a smile.

“How was school?” he asks and Taemin shrugs and continues eating. It’s not the response Kibum wants. “What did you learn?” Taemin rolls his eyes and swallows his bite of rice.

“Usual stuff, dad. It was fine.”

Kibum can hear the unwillingness to talk and he lets the topic drop and turns around to question Jinki about his day and talk about what has happened. As soon as Taemin finishes, he stands and hurries from the table, only returning when Jinki calls after him to clean up after himself. Kibum just sighs when the door closes again and Jinki turns to look at him quizzically.



“Honey, what’s wrong?” Jinki asks and Kibum climbs under the covers and pulls closer to Jinki. Jinki lets his hand rest around Kibum’s midsection so he can pull him a little closer. Kibum has been unusually quiet in the evening and Jinki is starting to worry a little about his husband.

“It’s Taemin,” Kibum says and sighs. Jinki frowns in confusion.

“Taemin?” he asks and Kibum nods against his chest, hair tickling Jinki’s neck. Jinki doesn’t understand what’s wrong with Taemin. To him, Taemin acts the same as all other teenagers. Granted, he’s a little more isolated than his brothers were but it’s not something Jinki considers unusual. After all he is the youngest and he must be tired of having such old parents at times. They’re not exactly trendy.

“He’s acting differently from usual. I worry about him but he doesn’t want to talk to me.”

The information worries Jinki as well. He’s still not sure how Taemin is acting differently but if Kibum worries more than usual, then it doesn’t really matter what exactly Kibum considers different. Jinki wants to comfort Kibum and tell him he’s seeing things, but it’s not so much Kibum’s reaction as much as it’s Taemin’s avoidance that’s beginning to worry Jinki.

“Now you're making me worried too,” Jinki says and Kibum slaps his chest lightly.

“Sssh,” he says. “Don't worry.”

Jinki thinks that’s impossible but he doesn’t tell Kibum.



Kibum needs to know what’s up with Taemin and when Taemin doesn’t want to speak to him, Kibum hopes he speaks to his brothers. And Kibum really shouldn’t be doing this but Taemin keeps isolating himself and his worry only grows.

When he calls Jonghyun, it isn’t really with the intention to ask about Taemin. He just wants to know how his oldest son is holding up and he wants to know
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !