Day 18

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family eighteen   Roo barks and a wail sounds throughout the house. Kibum rushes from the living room where he had been working on his laptop and into the hallway, only to find Taemin clinging to the potted plant, crying, while Roo barks at him. Taemin is standing on wobbly legs, the potted plant the only thing that’s providing him some stability.

Kibum gently pushes Roo away with his foot before he plops down next to the small boy. He doesn’t lift him, only gently removes his tears and soothes him with his voice.

Kibum hadn’t even been thinking about Taemin’s progress. He knew he was crawling, the small child crawling had been causing them all kinds of problems and the apartment had had to be child-secured once again without them even realizing how many troubles that would bring Minho and Jonghyun. But Kibum hadn’t been aware that Taemin was standing on his own with a little help. It doesn’t really come as a shock to him, but rather in small surges of guilt.

He followed Jonghyun and Minho’s development like a hawk, took pictures of everything. He didn’t get to see Jonghyun’s first step but he videotaped Minho’s and now he was about to miss all of Taemin’s development because they have two older sons that demand their attention as well.

Taemin isn’t crying anymore and Kibum just sends him a wide smile as he runs his hands over the boy’s black hair.

“I’ll find the camera,” he says to no one in particular and gets up from the floor, Taemin breaking into a smile and a small bounce when he sees his father again. Kibum returns to the hallway soon enough, camera in hand and snaps a photo or five of his son standing.

Taemin reaches towards something to grab onto and Kibum lends him a hand. Kibum’s hand isn’t stable enough for Taemin to take a small sliding step, however, so he ends up sitting but he’s still smiling.

It’s so unlike Minho who barely tried before he was sure he could walk almost perfectly but Taemin’s trial and error is so cute Kibum feels his heart swelling with pride. He lifts the small boy up and kisses his cheek before he brings him to the living room and puts him down in his lap.

Taemin babbles and waves his arms in big movements as if he’s telling the most exciting tale and Kibum nods and frowns in all the apparently right places because Taemin giggles and keeps going, encouraged by his father’s response.

Kibum laughs when Taemin accidentally hits his cheek in a particularly big arm movement and Taemin joins him in small giggles. Kibum loves Taemin. He also loves the rest of his family, but working home today seems to have been the best thing he has done in months. Having quality time with his youngest son and seeing what he’s going through and what he’s working towards is a blessing Kibum might have been taken for granted. Now he doesn’t anymore.

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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !