Day 35

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family Thirtyfive   Minho has been thinking a lot during summer. He's been really bored so there's been a lot of time to think. All his friends ever talk about is girls, there's no soccer practice and his best friend Sooyoung has been on a month long vacation so he hasn't even had her company. Therefore it's a welcome break when Kibum tells him they're going on a 5-day camping trip to the ocean. Minho doesn't think he's ever been at the ocean before so he just nods and starts packing.

The next couple of days is a mess. Kibum is busy packing for all 5 of them because the man is positive one of them will forget something crucial. He's packing for Taemin solely although the 8-year old boy could easily do it himself. Jonghyun and Minho aren't allowed to put anything into their bags before Kibum has inspected it and Jinki is not allowed to pack anything at all. Kibum's argument is 'you're so extremely clumsy you'll ruin something in the process' and Jinki thinks it's reasonable enough, so he doesn't touch anything and just leaves his usband to the packing.

When they're finally ready to go and the car is loaded, they all climb into the car. Taemin sits in the middle because he's the youngest but one hour later, when he's resting his head against Jonghyun's shoulder and his hip is digging into Minho's thigh while he's sleeping, they're both regretting the seating arrangement.

"Hey, I was thinking..." says Minho but Jinki interrupts him.

"I thought I smelled something burning!" He has a huge grin on his lips and both Minho and Jonghyun groans.

"Dad, no," Jonghyun says and Minho tries again.

"Can't we stop at the next resting area so we can rearrange the seating?" Jinki has a new smart reply on his way when Kibum agrees. He sulks a little the next couple of minutes because man, his husband just ruined his flow.

They stop at the next rest area and Taemin is groggy when they wake him up. He falls asleep a minute or two later, head now resting against the window. Minho and Jonghyun plays a game of rock, paper, scissor to determine who gets to sit in the middle. In the end Jonghyun loses.

"It's because you're so small!" When Jonghyun charges after him with a 'not everybody can be a giant', Minho is running away with a laugh. Kibum buys a bit of food and candy for the long trip to the sea and soon they're on their way again. Minho is playing with his tablet and Jonghyun is listening to music. It's all very peaceful in the car until Taemin wakes up.

"Hey Taemin-ah, want me to tell a joke?" Jinki says and Minho groans and quickly finds his headset so he doesn't have to listen to more of Jinki's bad jokes. The youngest just nods. "Why do bees hum?" He's observing Taemin in the rearview mirror and the boy looks genuinely interested in the answer when he shrugs and asks 'why?' "Because they don't know the words!" Jinki finishes his joke and sends another glance towards Taemin. Kibum is hiding his face in his palms. Taemin doesn't get the joke thou
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !