Day 27

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family Twentyseven   "Do I have to?" Jinki is standing in the doorway looking at their oldest son. The 16 year old sits on his bed about to write in a journal of some sort but his eyes are now focused on his father. Jinki nods.

"Yes. It's Taemin's birthday, you can do this for him." The teenager groans.

"But dad!" he tries but Jinki is having none of that.

"Jonghyun, we're not discussing this. Get ready, we're leaving in 5 minutes." Jinki leaves the sulking teenager to himself. In another room, Kibum is having the exact same conversation with the 13-year-old Minho.

"Dad, please, do I have to come?" Kibum sighs.

"Yes Minho, you do."

"But..." Minho tries but Kibum sends him a stern look.

"No buts. Get ready." In the hallway is an excited 6-year-old Taemin, all dressed and ready to leave. He wears his favorite shoes and he even had Kibum style his hair. He's waiting for the rest of his family because they're going to the zoo and Taemin can't wait. Jinki and Kibum join him soon after and get ready as well.

"Boys, come on!" Kibum shouts into the now silent apartment and a sulky Minho and an indifferent Jonghyun join them in the hallway as well. Taemin grabs Jinki's hand when the man opens the front door and sends his brothers a huge smile.

"It'll be fun!" He says and the two boys sigh simultaneously.



Taemin is having the time of his life. First off, because it's his birthday so he has been spoiled with candy, lots of candy. Anything he wants, he gets. He enjoys this a lot because Jonghyun and Minho get told off a lot instead. Maybe it's because they seem so moody all the time. Taemin points to the animals in their large cages every time he spots one. Kibum joins him.

Jinki keeps an eye on the two teenagers who continuously lack behind. He thinks that this may be the best birthday of his life and he's glad that his fathers agreed to go to the zoo. He's also silently satisfied with the fact that his brothers have been forced to join. It makes him feel a little sneaky and it makes him feel sort of good.

As time goes by though, the teenagers begin to enjoy it as well. With happiness comes freedom and Jonghyun is allowed to drag Minho back to the tigers because Jinki actually believes they'll behave. Taemin wants to go with them but Kibum takes his hand and tells him he's not old enough to run around on his own. They arrange to meet up at the pet zoo at 3 pm and the teenagers take off and Taemin stays behind.

When they get to the pet zoo to meet up with the other two, Taemin has eaten so much candy he feels awful
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !