Day 28

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family Twentyeight   The second-floor apartment is completely dark aside from a few lit candle lights in the living room. The curtains are all rolled down, not letting any light from outside into the apartment. There's unsettling music playing on lowest volume, trapping the apartment in a creepy atmosphere. On the floor of the living room sits three boys in a circle. They're all dressed in black and looking at each other. The two oldest share a glance when the youngest looks around in the living room.

"Are you ready?" The 13-year-old black-haired boy asks and the other two nod. They're completely ready. It's Jonghyun who initially begins the story telling.

"In Japan, there's this forest called Aokigahara Woods," Jonghyun starts and looks at his brothers before he continues in a low voice. "It's located at the foot of Mount Fuji and people have been killing themselves here for years. People that dares to visit the forest now sees the ghosts of all those people who once killed themselves and it's said that if you encounter a ghost at the Aokigahara Woods, you'll kill yourself in the same wood in less than six months." It may be slightly altered but the purpose of telling ghost stories in the dark living room is to scare Taemin so Jonghyun thinks it doesn't really matter whether he adds to the story or not. The youngest of the three boys doesn't seem slightly affected by the story, though. Jonghyun thinks it's pretty badass because he kind of got the chills when he read the story. Next up is Minho.

"Okay okay, in Amityville in USA is a house. In 1974 a man was convicted for killing his family inside the house. Investigators were puzzled by facts like the gun didn't have a silencer and there were no signs of struggle whatsoever. But then in 1975, a new family moved into the house." Minho looks around and his voice drops an octave. "The new family said they heard voices, their daughter became friends with a red-eyed pig, furniture moved on its own, the house attracted swarms of flies and there were banging on the wall." Minho knocks on the wooden floor for emphasis. Jonghyun bites his lower lip. Taemin just sits there, listening intently to what Minho is talking about. "Some paranormal investigators said they had found paranormal energy in the house as well. One of them said he'd been pressed to the floor in the basement by an unknown energy. The house is still there and nobody dares to go near it because they're afraid of the ghosts." Taemin shrugs.

"Can I tell a story now?" The two older brothers look at each other. Damn, it's hard to scare the youngest. The music changes slightly and the creepy atmosphere intensifies. Jonghyun just nods to Taemin and urges him to start his ghost story.

"There is..." He's interrupted by a clank on the window. All three boys turn around and stare towards the big window, covered by the curtain.

"What was that?" Jonghyun asks and Minho snorts a little.

"Are you scared?" the 13-year-old boy asks and Jonghyun huffs offended.

"Of course not!" Taemin just has his eyes focused on the big window while the two older bicker. Another clank sounds from the window and Taemin nudges Jonghyun's thigh.

"Hyung, there's something outside." Minho turns to look at his younger brother.

"No, that's ridiculous Taemin. We live on the second floor. There's nothing outside." But Taemin is stubborn.

"But hyung, there really is something outside!" Jonghyun turn
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !