Day 40

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family Forty   Snow is covering the ground when Kibum gets off from work. It looks beautiful but the man is thankful that it is no longer snowing because he will be walking home. It's December 23rd and he's looking forward to spending the next couple of days with his family. Last year Jonghyun had spent Christmas with Sekyung and the year before that Minho had been hanging out with Sooyoung. Kibum knows that Christmas is more of a lovers holiday but he's still grateful his sons have decided to spend it with him and Jinki. Well - on one condition; that Jinki and Kibum isn't going to be greasy and too much in love. This is Taemin's request. Jonghyun no longer minds it whenever he sees them together and Minho shrugs because seeing his fathers happy matters more than not seeing them in love. Taemin, however, has just the age to find it gross.

Kibum smiles as he walks down the sidewalk. He's walking in his own happy thoughts, wondering what they're going to do tonight, maybe watch a movie and be a happy family while they eat a lot of candy because it's only Christmas once a year when he hears a scream and tires screeching.

He turns his head only to stare at two crashed cars, headlights pointing directly at him. There's someone crying, someone shouting and without thinking he starts running towards the accident. There's a man stumbling onto the road from one of the cars. He's bleeding from his temple and Kibum shouts at someone to call an ambulance. He looks into one of the cars and finds a man unconscious. With the help of another passerby, he assures that the man is alive.

When he takes a look into the other car, though, his heart plummets and it's as if time freezes. He's staring at a pregnant woman. There are two children in the backseat behind her. He can't do anything but blink. It doesn't help though because every time he blinks the children transform into his sons and the pregnant woman transforms into Jinki.

Kibum feels so lifeless when someone grabs his shoulder and starts shaking him. It turns out to be the paramedics and Kibum waves away their questions. He's not hurt and he doesn't know the persons in the car. He's just a passerby who was at the wrong place at the wrong time.

The snow starts falling again when he slowly starts his trek home. Kibum tries to erase the mental image of Jinki and the kids in the car but it's hard. He hates it even more because he knows that his family is safe inside their house. All he has to do is open the front door and step inside. He freezes outside of it anyway, hand on the handle and takes a deep breath. He's okay. He's okay. Kibum opens the door and enters the house.

For a moment everything is silent and Kibum is about to crumble from emotional pain, mental images, and anxiety. Then something scatters, there's a loud 'daaaad' followed by someone hissing and a bark. Kibum closes his eyes and bites his lower lip. His family is alive. It's not him who isn't going to celebrate Christmas this year without a family because they have been brutally killed. Jinki comes to greet him just as a tear rolls down his cheek.

"Kibum," he says and notices the tear on Kibum's cheek. "Honey, what's wrong?" Warm strong arms wrap around Kibum and he's pressed close to a warm chest, a beating heart and he starts crying. Jinki gently caresses his back while Kibum cries. He
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !